Thread:General9913/@comment-26393217-20170507113456

Hello General,

Could you* please help me by reviewing some English phrasing in my blog, when you find time?

It's about text being displayed in-game in "plain" English, not gaming jargon. If you want, you'll find them under:


 * Help.cfg -> Under ARMIES -> the Titans' descriptions.


 * Campaign.xcr -> In some .nis files -> well, all the '<<' entries.

Feel free to correct grammar, order of sentences, give your advice, etc. Then, I could load them in my game and check the strings' length. There is no urge for this and in the meanwhile, I have plenty other things to do.

As for why I suggest those changes in the respective files, the Titan part is very debatable but I consider the .NIS part as vanilla bugs (or overlooks)' corrections: somehow the writers considered the race and/alignment of the player's avatar in some few maps only, and not in most of the others! (Having a Ssrathi character speaking of 'lizards', a Fey one not knowing his/her queen, a Minotaur not aware of the Minotaur ways...). I've tried to keep up with the vanilla general tone (a mix of RPG and self-mockery humor), and  to keep the changes minimal (plus, I'm not a writer).

you*: can basic members edit other members' blogs? 