Thread:General9913/@comment-26393217-20170507113456/@comment-14077361-20170511001506

Okay, line 2 "He who delivers powerful reels and the Knights' Titan Calls forth the High King''. I think "reels" mean drums. I did a research and looks like it's kid of Irish dance as well, but it's out of context.

Line 5 "the Minotaurs' Titan Calls forth the heroic zombi giant of Graww". I'd leave it as zombi, but if you want to, you can change to zombie.

Tips section - "Face to a massed horde of enemies, better oppose a squad of unexperimented archers, and let the AI manage the targeting: a miss may well hit a neighbour foe, spreading the damage overall."

I think the following would be better: "When faced by a massive horde of enemies, it's a good idea to use a squad of inexperienced archers and let the AI manage the targeting: a miss may well hit a neighbour foe, spreading the damage overall."

Same for this: "Face to a few resilient enemies, better oppose a squad of experimented archers, and focus the fire at one target at a time: multiple successful fires will soon lessen the threat."

I'd write it as "When faced by few resilient enemies, better oppose a squad of experimented archers, and focus the fire at one target at a time: multiple successful fires will soon lessen the threat."

I'll take a look in Campaign dialogs in the next few days! http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20110904041913/central/images/1/1c/Emoticon_yes.png